Can U improve Ur writing skills?

I found this in some forum i daily visit.
i want to share it with you.
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You can clarify almost anything by putting it into fewer words.

Factoid:
Time taken to process an n-word sentence is proportional to n^3, or more.

Cut the length in half, and you make it 8 times easier to read. (Maybe.)

An example:

“One of the best things you can do for yourself to improve your writing is to learn how to cut out words that are not necessary.”
Keep watching…

“One of the best things you can do for yourself to improve your writing is to learn how to cut out words that are not necessary.”

Keep watching…

“One of the best ways to improve your writing is to learn how to cut out words that are not necessary.”

Keep watching…

“One of the best ways to improve your writing is to learn how to cut out words that are not necessary.”

Keep watching…

“One of the best ways to improve your writing is to learn how to cut out unnecessary words.”

That’s a lot better.
Can we go further?

“One of the best ways to improve your writing is to learn how to cut out unnecessary words.”

Keep watching…

“To improve your writing, learn how to cut out unnecessary words.”

Keep watching…

“To improve your writing, learn how to cut out unnecessary words.”

Keep watching…

“To improve your writing, cut out unnecessary words.”

There! 25 words reduced to 8!
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Funny, isn’t it?

July 14th, 2005 - Posted in Fun, Thoughts | |

2 Responses to ' Can U improve Ur writing skills? '

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  1. abdo said,

    on August 19th, 2005 at 4:29 pm

    y.it is

  2. Vernal Word said,

    on September 15th, 2005 at 12:51 am

    loooooooooool

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